The IC Critque Meme!

[inconstantly]

Have you ever wanted to tell your fellow COST recruits what you think of them without consequence? Does their cavalier attitude toward murder, or lack of any critical thinking skills, or naive optimism cause frustration? Or is it something even more minor that really irks you, like that your roommate keeps borrowing your clothes or your friend won't use punctuation when they type?

WELL THEN--

THE LOWDOWN
• Post a header with your character's name.
• Comment in-character to other people's headers. With what? Depends on your CR! Maybe they're a good person and really should keep on keeping on, maybe literally everyone can see they need to suck it up and confess already, maybe they'll change their wicked ways if just one extra person casts aspersions on their pompadour. Bring in examples if you want, as with any helpful critique. Be as creative as you like!
• Other characters will comment to yours, no doubt overflowing with well-meaning advice on how to be the best person they can be. Your character is free to respond. Excuse you, maybe despair is still in fashion??
• Feel free to assume there's a compulsion to speak their minds if your character's not usually the type to give unsolicited advice.
• A probably unnecessary reminder, but just remember, this is not a place for OOC crit! There are other, more appropriate channels for that.

Shamelessly borrowed and modified from hadriel and empatheias

 

 

Comments

mordred "i really hate my dad"

[bloodings]

Huh? I surpassed my father, so I'm already perfect, obviously!

[horsepowered]

I think if you stopped focusing on your father so much and lived for yourself, you'd be much happier.

[bloodings]

I don't focus on him! But in a conversation about kings, or knights, or fighting, or food, or it's impossible not to mention King Arthur!

[horsepowered]

Mordred.

[THIS IS HOW MUCH HE BELIEVES YOU BUDDY.]

[gerechtigkeit]

You're reliable and I consider you to be trustworthy- but at times I still think you're a child.

[bloodings]

... Trustworthy? That's the real joke. You know I'm a traitor, right?

[gerechtigkeit]

Of course.

[And?]

[trample]

mordred more like
snoredred

[bloodings]

ivan plz

[northerndragon]

You should worry more about living up to your father.

[bloodings]

You think I don't know that?

... But seriously, it's not like I admire him, or want to live up to him. I just need to be better than he was. I'm not worried about it at all.

[northerndragon]

Isn't that living up to him and then some? Unless you want to be better than him in some way that doesn't really matter.

[Like video games.]

[ryuji]

Honestly your whole family tree thing kinda confuses the hell outta me

[bloodings]

My father is the only part of it that matters. Don't waste your time on the rest.

[ryuji]

EXCHHHHH wrong

you're the only part that matters

[omniavincit]

You have the impulse control of a toddler.

[bloodings]

So it's like that, huh? Hmm.

Hey, come here so I can hit you.

[omniavincit]

...but not the initiative.

[byfist]

I'm sorry I insulted knights to your face.


Let's agree to never let you in my office again.

[bloodings]

Your office is boring anyway.

I'll stay out, but it has nothing to do with your apology.

[lefthandfree]

please wear more clothes

— concerned individual

[bloodings]

No way. These ones are comfortable. Who wants to dress like some stuffy fool?

[lefthandfree]

depends on what you think is stuffy, i guess. you wear tight clothing anyway though. how is that not stuffy?

[raisedbybirds]

Your bluster makes it difficult to take you seriously.

[bloodings]

This is just my regular attitude. If you don't like it, that's your problem.