The IC Critque Meme!

[inconstantly]

Have you ever wanted to tell your fellow COST recruits what you think of them without consequence? Does their cavalier attitude toward murder, or lack of any critical thinking skills, or naive optimism cause frustration? Or is it something even more minor that really irks you, like that your roommate keeps borrowing your clothes or your friend won't use punctuation when they type?

WELL THEN--

THE LOWDOWN
• Post a header with your character's name.
• Comment in-character to other people's headers. With what? Depends on your CR! Maybe they're a good person and really should keep on keeping on, maybe literally everyone can see they need to suck it up and confess already, maybe they'll change their wicked ways if just one extra person casts aspersions on their pompadour. Bring in examples if you want, as with any helpful critique. Be as creative as you like!
• Other characters will comment to yours, no doubt overflowing with well-meaning advice on how to be the best person they can be. Your character is free to respond. Excuse you, maybe despair is still in fashion??
• Feel free to assume there's a compulsion to speak their minds if your character's not usually the type to give unsolicited advice.
• A probably unnecessary reminder, but just remember, this is not a place for OOC crit! There are other, more appropriate channels for that.

Shamelessly borrowed and modified from hadriel and empatheias

 

 

Comments

John "i do stupid in spades" Constantine

[inconstantly]

[thoughtimight]

Stubborn.

While it's a dominant quality and likely a reason for downfall...overall a good man.

Dolores "I Can't Google That For You" Abernathy

[thoughtimight]

[inconstantly]

Needlessly passive aggressive. Undecided if aggressive aggressive is better.

Still. Intriguing conversationalist, delightful sense of humor.

ryo "mark me down as both intrigued and horrified" asuka

[reillumination]

[inconstantly]

Concerned that you stole my gimmick, mate.

mordred "i really hate my dad"

[bloodings]

Huh? I surpassed my father, so I'm already perfect, obviously!

[horsepowered]

I think if you stopped focusing on your father so much and lived for yourself, you'd be much happier.

Dorian "shake that brass" Pavus

[excelsus]

[thoughtimight]

Slightly eerie.

But your passion for facial hair leads me to believe that you're detail-oriented and valuable to a team.

siegfried "sumanai-san"

[gerechtigkeit]

[bloodings]

Pull the stick out of your ass and use it as a spine instead. You can do that, right?

William "bleed on it" Temple

[omniavincit]

[thoughtimight]

I'm...

very happy that you're here with me.

But it also worries me.

chiron "no the other chiron"

[horsepowered]

[bloodings]

It's annoying that you always know things. Can't you at least pretend to play dumb sometimes?

minatsuki "her true appeal is the armadillo" takami

[jailbirds]

[prizeneck]

You weren't kidding about that whole "getting into character" thing, huh?

vex'ahlia "i miss my bear son"

[faenthras]

[horsepowered]

No critiques to register yet, but I suspect that warning people about where your bear is will be a problem at some point in the future.

ryuji "broke as hell" sakamoto

[ryuji]

[bloodings]

You're an idiot, a fool, and weak as a mage. It's difficult to imagine anyone less suited to be a Master.

... Put simply, you're far too good of a person. That makes things hard for me sometimes, you know?

john overwatch

[mylawn]

[pointedlook]

You're the most cynical and keyed up person I've ever met.

Not sure where that stands on the sliding good-bad scale.

heine "don't talk to me" rammsteiner

[whitehair]

[jailbirds]

You're alright.

[ this is a compliment........... ]

arthur [redacted]

[pointedlook]

no mordred not that one

[bloodings]

Change your damn name.

mr sir henry fourleaf clover motherfucker

[handsomefoil]

[pointedlook]

Good taste in alcohol, better taste in clothing.

You should really address your family problems. Just as precaution.

Ur goddamned commander

[byfist]

This is the part if any of you were getting paid, she'd dock your pay.

[pointedlook]

You'd make a killing as a dominatrix, in case you ever consider retiring or getting a side gig.

ignis "my dog cooks better than you do" scientia

[cookeries]

[thoughtimight]

Your hair

is it

real?

Meliorn "yes no maybe can you repeat the question" from Shadowhunters

[verumdicit]

[handsomefoil]

I can't believe you got me to sing. Charming and persuasive, even if you probably weren't trying to be.

Persuasive, that is.

ashitaka "y'all need the kami"

[lonelywar]

[dipolar]

You need to go back home.

thor "the hammer is my--" odinson

[thunders]

[inconstantly]

Excellent roommate and a crack up.

Has no appreciation for art though.

james buchanan "everything is fine and i'm not dead inside" "bucky" barnes

[lefthandfree]

[handsomefoil]

A good dancer, with a mean left swing. I have to admit, you're a comforting presence.

metroid is a pretty cool guy

[raisedbybirds]

[prizeneck]

Was expecting you to be an annoying roommate. Actually pleasantly surprised.

Mamoru “no chill” Hijikata

[prizeneck]

[omniavincit]

I'm sorry you're so uncomfortable asking for help that you had to concoct a hypothetical to justify it.

I do like you.

Jeyne "I swear I'm not a black widow" Westerling

[goodandtrue]

[dipolar]

This life doesn't suit you; it is for a cruel sort. Adapt or stay out of the way.

(okay, he actually means well by this... somehow...)

HEI

[dipolar]