The IC Critque Meme!

[inconstantly]

Have you ever wanted to tell your fellow COST recruits what you think of them without consequence? Does their cavalier attitude toward murder, or lack of any critical thinking skills, or naive optimism cause frustration? Or is it something even more minor that really irks you, like that your roommate keeps borrowing your clothes or your friend won't use punctuation when they type?

WELL THEN--

THE LOWDOWN
• Post a header with your character's name.
• Comment in-character to other people's headers. With what? Depends on your CR! Maybe they're a good person and really should keep on keeping on, maybe literally everyone can see they need to suck it up and confess already, maybe they'll change their wicked ways if just one extra person casts aspersions on their pompadour. Bring in examples if you want, as with any helpful critique. Be as creative as you like!
• Other characters will comment to yours, no doubt overflowing with well-meaning advice on how to be the best person they can be. Your character is free to respond. Excuse you, maybe despair is still in fashion??
• Feel free to assume there's a compulsion to speak their minds if your character's not usually the type to give unsolicited advice.
• A probably unnecessary reminder, but just remember, this is not a place for OOC crit! There are other, more appropriate channels for that.

Shamelessly borrowed and modified from hadriel and empatheias

 

 

Comments

john overwatch

[mylawn]

[pointedlook]

You're the most cynical and keyed up person I've ever met.

Not sure where that stands on the sliding good-bad scale.

[mylawn]

If you'd been through what I have, you'd be cynical too.

[pointedlook]

Not doubting you have your reasons. Still pretty astonishing, considering the soulless corporations I've done work for. There's them and then there's you, somewhere fifty miles ahead on the cynic line.

I think it's edging towards impressive.

[faenthras]

Darling, you need to smile more.

[mylawn]

Don't want to scare the kids.

[faenthras]

Oh please, they'll be fine.

[thoughtimight]

Thank you for your help.

[mylawn]

You don't need to thank me.

[thoughtimight]

I appreciate your time. That's all.

I won't let you down.

Re: john overwatch

[thunders]

*Johnathan

[mylawn]

Go away.

[thunders]

Make me.

[handsomefoil]

You're a lot more fun than most people give you credit for, but that's probably just me?
Also both glad and not...glad that you don't pull your punches during spars.

[mylawn]

Oh. I was pulling my punches.

Re: john overwatch

[byfist]

The... Uniform... Fits you very well.

[mylawn]

You should see what I used to wear.

[whitehair]

sleep some

[mylawn]

Ehn.

[prizeneck]

You remind me of someone I've met.

[... is that a good thing WHO KNOWS]

[mylawn]

I get that sometimes.

[horsepowered]

Your cynicism is actually something I find reliable and useful.

With that said, I might like to actually know your name and more about your own home at some point.

[mylawn]

You'd be surprised how many people don't see the advantage.

I'll tell you about Earth. You got any specific questions?

[raisedbybirds]

I don't dislike you.

[mylawn]

Coming from you, that means a lot.