The IC Critque Meme!

[inconstantly]

Have you ever wanted to tell your fellow COST recruits what you think of them without consequence? Does their cavalier attitude toward murder, or lack of any critical thinking skills, or naive optimism cause frustration? Or is it something even more minor that really irks you, like that your roommate keeps borrowing your clothes or your friend won't use punctuation when they type?

WELL THEN--

THE LOWDOWN
• Post a header with your character's name.
• Comment in-character to other people's headers. With what? Depends on your CR! Maybe they're a good person and really should keep on keeping on, maybe literally everyone can see they need to suck it up and confess already, maybe they'll change their wicked ways if just one extra person casts aspersions on their pompadour. Bring in examples if you want, as with any helpful critique. Be as creative as you like!
• Other characters will comment to yours, no doubt overflowing with well-meaning advice on how to be the best person they can be. Your character is free to respond. Excuse you, maybe despair is still in fashion??
• Feel free to assume there's a compulsion to speak their minds if your character's not usually the type to give unsolicited advice.
• A probably unnecessary reminder, but just remember, this is not a place for OOC crit! There are other, more appropriate channels for that.

Shamelessly borrowed and modified from hadriel and empatheias

 

 

Comments

[raisedbybirds]

Talk to Grothia like a responsible adult about keeping our rooms.

Or murder your new roommate.

[prizeneck]

Careful. You’ll risk sounding like you actually want me to do that.

[raisedbybirds]

The part about being responsible the part about murdering?

[ANSWER CAREFULLY.]

[prizeneck]

You tell me.

[raisedbybirds]

[smooth]

Be a responsible human being that doesn't seriously resort to roommate murder because you miss me.

[prizeneck]

Hasn’t being my roommate taught you anything?

[raisedbybirds]

That you have the same shitty sleeping schedule as me. That you make make unsubtle prying questions on the network that probably would have been more fruitful if you were more direct. And were only noticed because you're not the only battle focused or tactically minded person, myself not excluded. That it's great that I can walk around in my skivvies around you and care even less about it.

[YOU KNOW WHAT she's actually tired for once of tip-toeing around these walls of dry words and dry jokes that are maybe only half-jokes. She has opinions on this matter and he needs to hear them, especially since she doesn't dislike him and maybe sort of wouldn't mind continuing to be his roommate.]

You're not going to murder anyone on my behalf unless there is a damn good reason, Mamoru. [This is not an affirmation like he's probably seeking; her tone is that of a stern stipulation.]

I'm not going to be around forever anyway.

[prizeneck]

JESUS CHRIST

[he’s smirking like an asshole here.] And you think I will? I really don’t have to kill them.

[raisedbybirds]

[Yep. There it is. That insufferable asshole Mamoru smirk. She absolutely should be used to it by now but she's not sure she ever will be.

She's trying to force a laugh and it's not quite working. LOOK AT HER KIND OF. SORT OF. VAGUELY BACKPEDAL.]

What else, pray tell, would you do with them?

[prizeneck]

I'm persuasive when I have to be.