The IC Critque Meme!

[inconstantly]

Have you ever wanted to tell your fellow COST recruits what you think of them without consequence? Does their cavalier attitude toward murder, or lack of any critical thinking skills, or naive optimism cause frustration? Or is it something even more minor that really irks you, like that your roommate keeps borrowing your clothes or your friend won't use punctuation when they type?

WELL THEN--

THE LOWDOWN
• Post a header with your character's name.
• Comment in-character to other people's headers. With what? Depends on your CR! Maybe they're a good person and really should keep on keeping on, maybe literally everyone can see they need to suck it up and confess already, maybe they'll change their wicked ways if just one extra person casts aspersions on their pompadour. Bring in examples if you want, as with any helpful critique. Be as creative as you like!
• Other characters will comment to yours, no doubt overflowing with well-meaning advice on how to be the best person they can be. Your character is free to respond. Excuse you, maybe despair is still in fashion??
• Feel free to assume there's a compulsion to speak their minds if your character's not usually the type to give unsolicited advice.
• A probably unnecessary reminder, but just remember, this is not a place for OOC crit! There are other, more appropriate channels for that.

Shamelessly borrowed and modified from hadriel and empatheias

 

 

Comments

Dorian "shake that brass" Pavus

[excelsus]

[thoughtimight]

Slightly eerie.

But your passion for facial hair leads me to believe that you're detail-oriented and valuable to a team.

[excelsus]

Eerie. That's a first.

I am very particular, though, that part is true enough.

[thoughtimight]

Maybe that's your purpose for being here.

Details are important.

[excelsus]

I thought my purpose for being here was to look dashing?

[inconstantly]

Unnecessarily distracting. Places far too much interest on fine clothing on other people when it might not be to their tastes.

Never a bore, even during the times between a crisis.

[excelsus]

Only as unnecessarily distracting as necessary, darling. Also fine clothing isn't just a look, it's a texture, even if you have more austere presences texture should be appreciated now and then.

[Dorian will defend his aesthetics to the grave.]

[inconstantly]

Maybe the distractions are a good thing.

Keep the clothes. More for yourself anyway.

[excelsus]

I suppose I need to convince myself that something can bloom in the darkness.

I think once I get my hands on ten silk scarves you might have a change of heart.

[handsomefoil]

Charming to a fault and fairly excellent with a pair of scissors. My grooming savior.

[excelsus]

It's always a pleasure and if if you ever need my services again, well...I think you know where you can find me.

[handsomefoil]

Thanks, I'll remember that
This ended up being less critique and more of a compliment corner
Think I should stick with the theme?

[excelsus]

I have no idea, I mean I do enjoy compliments and they are so much more appealing

Re: Dorian "shake that brass" Pavus

[byfist]

If we agree to never talk about that noise I made, I'll bribe you with some moustache wax I picked up.

[excelsus]

Fair enough, but just so you know, it was hardly as bad as you think, it's a very endearing side to you.

[byfist]

:T

[excelsus]

See, adorable!

[horsepowered]

An excellent ambassador for your world, although your ability to put me to the point of making as many jokes as I do in your presence says a little too much about me.

[excelsus]

That you have humor within your hidden depths? Humor that even you were unaware of?

[horsepowered]

I believe it's the second question that's the more appropriate response, in truth.

[excelsus]

Truly? Well then that sounds a great deal like praise. You're quite easy, you know, when you give yourself allowance and I do enjoy your sense of humor. It suits you.

[dipolar]

(just shakes his head.......)

[excelsus]

You're too kind my dear, I do like how elegantly you deliver your critiques. So diplomatic.

[dipolar]

Keep it up and you'll get a verbal one.

[excelsus]

Oh, you wound me ser!