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constantine. ([personal profile] inconstantly) wrote in [community profile] ahogelogs2018-05-03 08:12 pm
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The IC Critque Meme!


Have you ever wanted to tell your fellow COST recruits what you think of them without consequence? Does their cavalier attitude toward murder, or lack of any critical thinking skills, or naive optimism cause frustration? Or is it something even more minor that really irks you, like that your roommate keeps borrowing your clothes or your friend won't use punctuation when they type?

WELL THEN--

THE LOWDOWN
• Post a header with your character's name.
• Comment in-character to other people's headers. With what? Depends on your CR! Maybe they're a good person and really should keep on keeping on, maybe literally everyone can see they need to suck it up and confess already, maybe they'll change their wicked ways if just one extra person casts aspersions on their pompadour. Bring in examples if you want, as with any helpful critique. Be as creative as you like!
• Other characters will comment to yours, no doubt overflowing with well-meaning advice on how to be the best person they can be. Your character is free to respond. Excuse you, maybe despair is still in fashion??
• Feel free to assume there's a compulsion to speak their minds if your character's not usually the type to give unsolicited advice.
• A probably unnecessary reminder, but just remember, this is not a place for OOC crit! There are other, more appropriate channels for that.

Shamelessly borrowed and modified from [community profile] hadriel and [dreamwidth.org profile] empatheias
 
 
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[personal profile] excelsus 2018-05-04 02:59 am (UTC)(link)
There was no word - For heaven or for earth, for sea or sky - All that existed was silence - Then the Voice of the Maker rang out - The first Word - And His Word became all that might be.

That's all I know of the Chant. I suppose you could think of him as a diety.
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[personal profile] thoughtimight 2018-05-04 03:03 am (UTC)(link)
That's beautiful.

If you remember the rest I would love to hear it.
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[personal profile] excelsus 2018-05-04 03:09 am (UTC)(link)
I rarely set foot in a Chantry, but I might be able to recall a Canticle or two.
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[personal profile] thoughtimight 2018-05-04 03:10 am (UTC)(link)
That would be lovely.
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[personal profile] excelsus 2018-05-04 03:13 am (UTC)(link)
Are you a religious sort? Or is it the poetic ambiance that you enjoy?
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[personal profile] thoughtimight 2018-05-04 03:17 am (UTC)(link)
The words. They're wonderful, like something vivid from a story.

I'm... not sure what I am.
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[personal profile] excelsus 2018-05-04 03:25 am (UTC)(link)
I see, well if it's just the words then I'll gladly go through what I can remember and we can have a sit down. It is something of a story, honestly, multiple stories.
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[personal profile] thoughtimight 2018-05-04 03:29 am (UTC)(link)
I'd like that very much.