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constantine. ([personal profile] inconstantly) wrote in [community profile] ahogelogs2018-05-03 08:12 pm
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The IC Critque Meme!


Have you ever wanted to tell your fellow COST recruits what you think of them without consequence? Does their cavalier attitude toward murder, or lack of any critical thinking skills, or naive optimism cause frustration? Or is it something even more minor that really irks you, like that your roommate keeps borrowing your clothes or your friend won't use punctuation when they type?

WELL THEN--

THE LOWDOWN
• Post a header with your character's name.
• Comment in-character to other people's headers. With what? Depends on your CR! Maybe they're a good person and really should keep on keeping on, maybe literally everyone can see they need to suck it up and confess already, maybe they'll change their wicked ways if just one extra person casts aspersions on their pompadour. Bring in examples if you want, as with any helpful critique. Be as creative as you like!
• Other characters will comment to yours, no doubt overflowing with well-meaning advice on how to be the best person they can be. Your character is free to respond. Excuse you, maybe despair is still in fashion??
• Feel free to assume there's a compulsion to speak their minds if your character's not usually the type to give unsolicited advice.
• A probably unnecessary reminder, but just remember, this is not a place for OOC crit! There are other, more appropriate channels for that.

Shamelessly borrowed and modified from [community profile] hadriel and [dreamwidth.org profile] empatheias
 
 
ryuji: (299)

ryuji "broke as hell" sakamoto

[personal profile] ryuji 2018-05-04 03:37 am (UTC)(link)
bloodings: (f43)

[personal profile] bloodings 2018-05-04 04:32 am (UTC)(link)
You're an idiot, a fool, and weak as a mage. It's difficult to imagine anyone less suited to be a Master.

... Put simply, you're far too good of a person. That makes things hard for me sometimes, you know?
ryuji: (213)

[personal profile] ryuji 2018-05-04 04:33 am (UTC)(link)
But I look great in a tanktop~
bloodings: (you are the sun)

[personal profile] bloodings 2018-05-04 04:42 am (UTC)(link)
Absolutely not.
ryuji: (077)

[personal profile] ryuji 2018-05-04 11:29 pm (UTC)(link)
C'mon Mordred

Suns out guns out, lets do this together
bloodings: (i'm breaking free)

[personal profile] bloodings 2018-05-05 12:50 am (UTC)(link)
[ ...

Just... slides off her jacket so she's only in her tube top. She's not that hard to enable. ]


Don't complain if you feel embarrassed, Master. It's fine to face defeat once in a while.
ryuji: (011)

[personal profile] ryuji 2018-05-05 01:22 am (UTC)(link)
[Takes off his shirt with reckless abandonment, smiles wider than the sun, and then looks at Mordred, and then away from her at some other, nondescript location.


Shit, this backfired.


Picks the tanktop back up and slides it over his chest.]


...


...


...


Why do you have better abs than me.
bloodings: (and all the ugly people)

[personal profile] bloodings 2018-05-05 01:36 am (UTC)(link)
[ rip

Mordred just laughs, obviously. Because she's an asshole. ]


I am a knight. You've seen the armour I wear, haven't you?
ryuji: (181)

[personal profile] ryuji 2018-05-05 01:37 am (UTC)(link)
Yeah. When are you gonna let me try it on? [Thinks about it for a second] C'mon... you can wear my metaverse outfit.
bloodings: (f4)

[personal profile] bloodings 2018-05-05 02:03 am (UTC)(link)
I'm not sure you'd fit.

[ It's made for her 5'1 ass, Ryuji. ]

Let me try yours first. Then, you can't change your mind when I laugh at you trying to deal with my armour.
whitehair: ( incestualicons ) (Default)

[personal profile] whitehair 2018-05-04 04:56 am (UTC)(link)
you'll probably die alone. get yourself a dog.
ryuji: (196)

[personal profile] ryuji 2018-05-04 11:28 pm (UTC)(link)
I had one for a week, I don't know what happened to it

It probably got sick of me and ran away
lefthandfree: (scrapes and lies)

[personal profile] lefthandfree 2018-05-04 05:43 am (UTC)(link)
i wish you could understand how important someone like you is to the universe. even when the world turns you away and pushes you down, breaks you apart to the very end, you are the force that’s needed to keep the balance in check.

maybe if you could see that, you wouldn’t be so afraid, act so tough and pretend you have to to carry everything you’ve gone through with a smile. it’s that facade that many disagree with, claim understanding by projecting their sense of ideals onto you.

don’t let them destroy you with their own insecurities. you’re needed, more than they could likely imagine.
ryuji: (011)

[personal profile] ryuji 2018-05-04 11:31 pm (UTC)(link)
Man... it doesn't matter what happens to me. I can take a beating, or two, or a hundred. My life's already pretty meaningless, but if what I'm fightin' for is enough for everyone else to have their spot in the sun, then shit, it's worth it.
ryuji: (016)

[personal profile] ryuji 2018-05-04 11:10 pm (UTC)(link)
Next time you scratch me, aim for my back
dipolar: ✭ TAKE IT IN VAIN (pic#11906234)

[personal profile] dipolar 2018-05-04 11:14 pm (UTC)(link)
Some crude damage to your face would make that pathetic suggestion actually feel threatening.
ryuji: (277)

[personal profile] ryuji 2018-05-04 11:36 pm (UTC)(link)
You took that as a threat?

Damn, you're so dense sometimes
dipolar: ✭ ANYBODY, ANYBODY (pic#11906313)

[personal profile] dipolar 2018-05-05 10:14 am (UTC)(link)
It's typical of me to think everyone is a threat unless proven otherwise.

Even you.