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constantine. ([personal profile] inconstantly) wrote in [community profile] ahogelogs2018-05-03 08:12 pm
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The IC Critque Meme!


Have you ever wanted to tell your fellow COST recruits what you think of them without consequence? Does their cavalier attitude toward murder, or lack of any critical thinking skills, or naive optimism cause frustration? Or is it something even more minor that really irks you, like that your roommate keeps borrowing your clothes or your friend won't use punctuation when they type?

WELL THEN--

THE LOWDOWN
• Post a header with your character's name.
• Comment in-character to other people's headers. With what? Depends on your CR! Maybe they're a good person and really should keep on keeping on, maybe literally everyone can see they need to suck it up and confess already, maybe they'll change their wicked ways if just one extra person casts aspersions on their pompadour. Bring in examples if you want, as with any helpful critique. Be as creative as you like!
• Other characters will comment to yours, no doubt overflowing with well-meaning advice on how to be the best person they can be. Your character is free to respond. Excuse you, maybe despair is still in fashion??
• Feel free to assume there's a compulsion to speak their minds if your character's not usually the type to give unsolicited advice.
• A probably unnecessary reminder, but just remember, this is not a place for OOC crit! There are other, more appropriate channels for that.

Shamelessly borrowed and modified from [community profile] hadriel and [dreamwidth.org profile] empatheias
 
 
handsomefoil: <user name="hanshi"> (Default)

mr sir henry fourleaf clover motherfucker

[personal profile] handsomefoil 2018-05-04 03:51 am (UTC)(link)
pointedlook: (we're gonna need a little more than that)

[personal profile] pointedlook 2018-05-04 03:54 am (UTC)(link)
Good taste in alcohol, better taste in clothing.

You should really address your family problems. Just as precaution.
handsomefoil: <user name="hanshi"> (✪ ɪ ʟɪᴠᴇ ɪɴ ʜɪs sᴋɪɴ)

[personal profile] handsomefoil 2018-05-04 04:08 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks, I try my best.

I'll address it when I do. Sounds like you want to hear me talk about it.
pointedlook: (pasiv (not passive))

[personal profile] pointedlook 2018-05-04 04:10 am (UTC)(link)
Seemed like you were ready to address it never.

Look, I made my money running around in people's fucked up subconscious. There's a lot to be said about talking through things.
handsomefoil: <user name="hanshi"> (❖ ɪ ᴊᴜsᴛ ᴅʀᴏᴘᴘᴇᴅ ɪɴ ᴛᴏ sᴇᴇ)

[personal profile] handsomefoil 2018-05-04 06:14 am (UTC)(link)
Well... I guess you're not wrong either.

I take it that's your professional advice.
pointedlook: <lj user="asylums" site="insanejournal.com"> (timing is everything)

[personal profile] pointedlook 2018-05-05 04:05 am (UTC)(link)
Professional and friendly both.

[ God he doesn't want to have to go here but here it is anyway: ]

My best friend nearly got himself killed because he didn't address his shit. Don't be the same.
handsomefoil: <user name="hanshi"> (Default)

[personal profile] handsomefoil 2018-05-05 06:38 am (UTC)(link)
[ you did it arthur

all jokes aside, he recognizes the seriousness of him bringing up such a topic.
]

I'll consider it
Seriously
lefthandfree: (scrapes and lies)

[personal profile] lefthandfree 2018-05-04 05:50 am (UTC)(link)
sometimes i hate that we’re friends because i don’t get why we get along so well and not understanding that is really frustrating. what is it about you that does this? i know it’s not me. i do my best with everyone. and i know you’re a dick to other people a lot.

so why?

i don’t hate you though. i don’t think i could. but i hate that i don’t understand.
handsomefoil: <user name="hanshi"> (♠ ᴡʜʏ ʏᴏᴜ ʟɪᴇ ᴀɴᴅ ʏᴏᴜ ᴄʜᴇᴀᴛ)

[personal profile] handsomefoil 2018-05-04 06:22 am (UTC)(link)
Maybe we'll find out somewhere down along the line. Can't say I've got any concrete answers for you there, mate.

Who knows, it might be because we're alike in some ways but just different enough to balance each other out. Something something journey of learning and understanding something something profound words.

Glad you don't hate me though. Thats a good start.
lefthandfree: (blind clarity)

[personal profile] lefthandfree 2018-05-04 06:25 am (UTC)(link)
“a good start” like we’re not even balls deep in something that’s weird as hell

but sure

a good start

let’s not. talk about that other shit or i’ll have a heart attack anyway.
handsomefoil: <user name="hanshi"> (♣ ᴄᴀɴ'ᴛ ɪ ɴᴏᴛ ᴛᴀᴋᴇ ɪᴛ ɪɴ ᴘᴀɪɴ?)

[personal profile] handsomefoil 2018-05-04 06:58 am (UTC)(link)
Weird, yes
But also a good start still I think, we're still in the process of
Starting

Yeah ok let's not. Im just making it worse.
lefthandfree: (before it's gone)

[personal profile] lefthandfree 2018-05-04 07:03 am (UTC)(link)
you are.

like i wasn’t even thinking you could make it worse.
and yet.

here we are.



so anyway you need more color in your wardrobe.
handsomefoil: <user name="hanshi"> (✪ ᴀɴᴅ ғᴇʟʟ-ᴀ ᴇɪɢʜᴛ ᴍɪʟᴇs ʜɪɢʜ)

[personal profile] handsomefoil 2018-05-04 07:06 am (UTC)(link)
Blue is a color
lefthandfree: (sinking in the sands)

[personal profile] lefthandfree 2018-05-04 07:08 am (UTC)(link)
i said more color. i didn’t say a color. geeze.
handsomefoil: <user name="hanshi"> (❖ ʜᴀᴠᴇ ʏᴏᴜ ᴇᴠᴇʀ ʙᴇᴇɴ ᴅᴏᴡɴ?)

[personal profile] handsomefoil 2018-05-04 09:04 pm (UTC)(link)
Im trying to be open to criticism so


Fine
Maybe I can throw in a little green or i dont know
What do you suggest
prizeneck: (15)

[personal profile] prizeneck 2018-05-04 08:39 am (UTC)(link)
Think you gotta work on your tells.
handsomefoil: <user name="hanshi"> (★ ᴛʜᴇ ᴏɴʟʏ ʀᴏᴀᴅ ɪ'ᴠᴇ ᴇᴠᴇʀ ʙᴇᴇɴ ᴅᴏᴡɴ)

[personal profile] handsomefoil 2018-05-04 09:23 pm (UTC)(link)
Perhaps
or maybe you're just too good at detecting them?
prizeneck: (12)

[personal profile] prizeneck 2018-05-05 01:24 pm (UTC)(link)
Me? Without being able to see? Are you sure?
handsomefoil: <user name="hanshi"> (♠ ᴡʜʏ ʏᴏᴜ ʟɪᴇ ᴀɴᴅ ʏᴏᴜ ᴄʜᴇᴀᴛ)

[personal profile] handsomefoil 2018-05-09 06:45 am (UTC)(link)
Didn't seem to stop you from doing it before
Otherwise how would you have known my tells needed improving
raisedbybirds: (089)

[personal profile] raisedbybirds 2018-05-04 05:11 pm (UTC)(link)
How are you possibly related to him.
handsomefoil: <user name="hanshi"> (♥✪  ᴛʜᴇ ᴀɪʀᴡᴀʏs ᴀʀᴇ ᴄʟᴇᴀɴ)

[personal profile] handsomefoil 2018-05-04 09:24 pm (UTC)(link)
I wondered that myself, to be quite honest